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Need ur opinion

Posted by assasinrabbit Nov. 18, 2007 @ 1:39 AM EST

All right, look Im doing a presentation about trade along the pacific, I hope it goes good. This is a part of the presentation, its not really finished yet but whatever. most ppl are using powerpoint or just pastin pictures on the board. Any idea how I could improve the presentation?

http://www.swfup.com/file/58504

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Nov. 18, 2007 | 4:20 AM EgoistXIV says:

AARGH!! The blue text in the 2nd frame burns my eyes, FFS!! Also, the graphics were horrible(so is your avatar, no extreme offense, just a small one). Get The GIMP from http://www.gimp.org/ or google it, whatever. Also, the arrow leading back towards beginning in the third frame slightly overlaps the number 2. That, IMO, is not so pretty. and the map frame, was, to me, horrible. I can recommend you Google Earth, or maps.google.com. you'll het pretty good satellite or hybrid images from those things by taking a screenshot or just by saving the image(in maps.google.com).

The animation, then. First of all, increase volume and reduce background noise, it sounded a blur on my headset. If you ain't got no programs for this, I can recommend wave pad.http://www.nch.com.au/wavepad/ The free, basic edition is freeware and should be sufficient for your needs(at least, it's good enough for me). If not, you can always download the shareware-licensed master edition. That has a 14 or 30 day trial limit though, so you'd better be fast if the basic isn't enough.

The flash format of your presentation has many good and bad sides. I don't know about pakistani schools, but even here in Finland, school computers are notorious for incredible lag even when typing in word/notepad, and, even worse, extreme compatibility problems. So, unless you're going to show the presentation from your very own and trusted laptop, I'd make it powerpoint. That doesn't mean you won't have any problems at all, but they will be slightly less likely.

Then the good sides(provided that you have checked ALL the equipment, including, but not limited to, the laptop or desktop you will be showing the flash from, the voice playback system, the video playback system and all the cables). You'll have an interactive presentation, and your teacher is probably going to like it, plus it will be original to make it in flash format, instead of just typing something on the blackboard.

More might come in a form of a pm.

Nov. 18, 2007 | 5:13 AM assasinrabbit responds:

well, ya see the thing is the graphics wherent awsome but they are stikk better than everything everyone else is using in the class, since this thing isnt relly made for ng. but thx anyway, btw whenever I try to download GIMP it gets messed up, thx for takin the time to make a long response though :D


Nov. 18, 2007 | 7:57 AM RavilMelling says:

um....the blue text is annoying, and the sound isn't good quality either...the best thing you could do, is record everything you wanted to say in Audacity, then silence all the parts where you do not talk (e.g.between words) and that would already make things better...but not bad for a school(?) presentation...good luck!

Nov. 20, 2007 | 9:58 AM assasinrabbit responds:

thx, the presentation did well and thx for the sound Idea never tried that


Nov. 23, 2007 | 6:16 AM IrishGun says:

You could improve it by punctuating.

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